VaderOnIce Posted February 3, 2005 Report Share Posted February 3, 2005 I know it's not exactly a word battle, but its still words. I figured the title alone would trick people into coming in here and reading it. Comments, criticisms, anything. Talk from the hip, bizzatches. And hey, DMC, you and I should be battling in here. Or working on an FNF rap. Exit 7 2 am doing 77 past exit 7 (if I hit 88 will I go back in time?) nothing behind me January Miami night wizzes and whines blows in slaps me awake with its wetness. Clarity plays on the radio stutters in the middle with trumpets seeming right in signature and sound. My half open eyes fight to stay trained on tail lights half a mile ahead. Between blinks I think of Anne's instant messenger elevator and the conversation within. Me looking for a watch up Jimmy Hoffa's ass her heading for a base jump and later old night on a beach out of a black and white photograph the only color light blue marblish eyes and an orange cone taking a nap in the sand under the lifeguard's house. You figure giddy would be the last thing doing a slow crawl up my spine as I hit 99 after another opposite sex interview ending in just a peck on the cheek plus a premonition of death in the black wings of a crow flying low enough across the freeway to be caught in the wake of me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bebop! Posted February 3, 2005 Report Share Posted February 3, 2005 Haha, that's nice. I love it. Although, I'm gonna have to hear someone do this spoken-word style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Posted February 3, 2005 Report Share Posted February 3, 2005 love the back to the future reference Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VaderOnIce Posted February 4, 2005 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2005 I love you guys for paying attention to me. Beers shall be bought for you during the meet. Thank you patting the fat sentimental kid inside of me on the back. I threw the back to the future in there cause it's 77 at the beginning (and that actually happened, it's one of the things on that particular day that made me think I might die, lots of weird number related shit happened to me along with the bird on the freeway) and then I have 88 BTTF and then 99 at the end. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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