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VaderOnIce

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No Title Yet... suggestions welcome

 

This morning, I got a call from my girlfriend.

I heard her tap away on her computer on the other end.

She asked me what I had for breakfast.

She asked me on the computer,

even though we were on the phone.

 

I typed to her: clickety clack

 

i got subway.

i got a bacon egg and cheese

sandwich on a deli roll

and the black lady

behind the counter

smiled

at my new bald head

and i made a sly penis joke.

 

i had to.

 

upon exiting the subway

i did find that the cuban

cafe next to it now offers

lottery tickets and i bought 1.

the girl behind that

counter smiled

at me too

smiled at friday

 

i think

 

and so my fervor was tripled

no,

quadrupled

with such heat and fire

that the water snuggling

in the cracks

of the street

did steam

as i walked up on

and beyond it

and i screamed

i'm rich beeeeeeeyotch

and the building's walls

did echo with my fury

 

and so they called me the man of fire.

 

Nature is trying very hard to make us succeed, but nature does not depend on us. We are not the only experiment.

- R. Buckminster Fuller

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I was thinking Man of Fire for the title, but it sounds too much like man on fire, that movie with Denzel.

 

I'm still kinda stuck as far as a title goes.

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I still haven't decided. Clickety clack doesn't do it for me, though. I want to name it something to do with smiles or heat. Or just something altogether weird. The poem has a... movement to it where it rises and clickety clack sounds too plateauish (I bet that's not a real word) to work.

 

However, regarding last night's convo between yourself, myself, and david, sorta, I got 3 chocies. fictionauts.vaderonice.com, endboss.vaderonice.com, and typerighter.vaderonice.com

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ooh damn those three are actually *really* good !!! fictionauts is tiiight man !

 

the other two are damn good too though, what a dilema. endboss is the only one most unlike the others, so maybe thats an easy cull.. but damn.. any would look good as a third level domain..

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