VaderOnIce Posted July 29, 2005 Report Share Posted July 29, 2005 No Title Yet... suggestions welcome This morning, I got a call from my girlfriend. I heard her tap away on her computer on the other end. She asked me what I had for breakfast. She asked me on the computer, even though we were on the phone. I typed to her: clickety clack i got subway. i got a bacon egg and cheese sandwich on a deli roll and the black lady behind the counter smiled at my new bald head and i made a sly penis joke. i had to. upon exiting the subway i did find that the cuban cafe next to it now offers lottery tickets and i bought 1. the girl behind that counter smiled at me too smiled at friday i think and so my fervor was tripled no, quadrupled with such heat and fire that the water snuggling in the cracks of the street did steam as i walked up on and beyond it and i screamed i'm rich beeeeeeeyotch and the building's walls did echo with my fury and so they called me the man of fire. Nature is trying very hard to make us succeed, but nature does not depend on us. We are not the only experiment. - R. Buckminster Fuller Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_bitch Posted July 29, 2005 Report Share Posted July 29, 2005 nice poem duder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrzlnSmrf Posted July 30, 2005 Report Share Posted July 30, 2005 very nice. im rich beeeeeyotch. tile? The Mornings Fire-Inside? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crilix Posted July 30, 2005 Report Share Posted July 30, 2005 Hah, I love it. Very well done, it feels kind of simplistic but powerful. As for a title... "Steam of the Street"? -Cril Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VaderOnIce Posted July 31, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2005 I was thinking Man of Fire for the title, but it sounds too much like man on fire, that movie with Denzel. I'm still kinda stuck as far as a title goes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coelacanth Posted August 1, 2005 Report Share Posted August 1, 2005 how bout: Emotive mathematics or Catalyst smiles I like sound of the first one more but the idea of the second more... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
etru_scan Posted August 4, 2005 Report Share Posted August 4, 2005 I think the title is obvious, my fren: Clickety Clack. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VaderOnIce Posted August 4, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2005 I still haven't decided. Clickety clack doesn't do it for me, though. I want to name it something to do with smiles or heat. Or just something altogether weird. The poem has a... movement to it where it rises and clickety clack sounds too plateauish (I bet that's not a real word) to work. However, regarding last night's convo between yourself, myself, and david, sorta, I got 3 chocies. fictionauts.vaderonice.com, endboss.vaderonice.com, and typerighter.vaderonice.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
etru_scan Posted August 4, 2005 Report Share Posted August 4, 2005 ooh damn those three are actually *really* good !!! fictionauts is tiiight man ! the other two are damn good too though, what a dilema. endboss is the only one most unlike the others, so maybe thats an easy cull.. but damn.. any would look good as a third level domain.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coelacanth Posted August 5, 2005 Report Share Posted August 5, 2005 i like the third one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
etru_scan Posted August 5, 2005 Report Share Posted August 5, 2005 i gots it. CLOACATRON.vaderonice.com. i r teh win! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VaderOnIce Posted August 5, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2005 cloakatron.vaderonice.com isn't that bad, actually. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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